Chapter 1 “The Sound of the Shell”
Is this what I see? A group of different boys. Well at least I have my choir. There is a faired hair boy with a fat and yet intellectual boy. The faired hair boy calls upon the other younger boys with different ages from 6 to 12 with a pink conch. “Were you the one who called upon my group” Jack said. “Well I guess since I’m the oldest I think I should be the groups leader.” Jack said. “No wait I think we should vote who the leader should be.” Piggy said. “Who is this fat boy?” Jack said. “This is PIGGY” Ralph said. “PIGGY, PIGGY, PIGGY” Ralph said. “HAHAHAHA” the group of boys sniggered. “Who thinks Ralph should be the leader or who thinks Jack?” Piggy asked. Jack’s choir all voted for Jack, but the rest of the kids voted for Ralph. Ralph thinks this is really stupid. I should be the person whose leader not that dumb fair haired boy Ralph. How dare Ralph ask me to lead my choirs or so called hunters leaders. Although I get to lead a bunch of strong boys. Then Ralph asks me to lead my choir and Simon one of my most valuable choir members to search around the island. We search around the island and we find a pig trapped in some vines. Jack draws his knife, but suddenly I hesitate and stop not to kill the pig. I swore to myself I will never stop on an action of killing.
1 comment:
really good. I like how you put in there at the end of every sentence who was just talking.
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