Chapeter 3 "Huts on the Beach"
It has been over 4 days, and I piggy is getting a little tendril. Ralph told me that he id very contrite on what he did with my glasses, but he also told me he’s enduring some vicissitudes because of Jack. He told me that Jack is rapt. He is completely absorbed on killing a pig for meat. Ralph told me whenever Jack talked about killing a pig a opaque light gleamed in his eye. Ralph asked Jack if he wants to be rescued, but all Jack did was get a compulsion because he still wants to kill a pig. Sometimes I hear Simon in the back susurration. Also Jack said he followed some footprints that were huffs, and he saw a slight creature fly through the tress making a short castanet sound, and still the question that comes to Ralph’s mind is do you want to be rescued Jack
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3 comments:
Alan~
I thought that you did a good job on explaining what happened throughout the day on the island. One of the things you could probably improve on is using your vocabulary words in more of a correct mannor. Next time, you may also want to add a little more detail on Piggy's perspective such as his thoughts, feelings and senses. Overall I think your blog post was very good.
Alan~
I thought that the way you talked the way piggy had talked in the book was a great way to step into another characters shoes. I also liked how you put the correct vocab. words in the right spots. overall your blog was pretty good but next time you may want to become more in depth with your character.
Your blog was very good, but I thought you can go more in depth with yur story and I think you can use your vocaburlary a better. I was also wondering for your last sentences were you finsih with it?
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